I enjoyed this story very much. The characters were very believable and well crafted. The story was quite original and as it developed further the mystery of what was happening made the ESP of the characters seem quite natural. I concentrated more and more on trying to figure out what was going on. The way things were progressing I was drawn into it more and more. I am happy to say that the climactic ending tied all the loose ends together beautifully. The story deserves five stars, but sadly, the grammar and spelling were somewhat clunky. I happen to suffer from the same problem. I usually go through two and sometimes three edits of my own stories before publishing and yet, I always find more things that I should have caught previously. For that reason, I have to take away one star. Still, on the overall, it was a good, enjoyable read.
Ernest Samuel Llime